Monday, November 9, 2015

Fireworks!

This weekend lots of us saw fireworks. We used this fantastic topic to write about. We tried to show our audience, through our description, what we were writing about. Here are some of our stories:

We went to the speedway and we got a fizzy. I got a hot dog and Brax got a round box full of chips. Bing! Bang! Boom! Off went the fireworks. I loved the fireworks.
By Riley

After school one day, I and my family went to the fireworks. They were beautiful.  We went on the parade. I went on the ferris wheel and laughing clowns. We had dinner at the Hippopotamus Museum Hotel. We had little hamburgers and pudding.
By George

As I was walking the gleaming fireworks glittered through the evening sky. There were love hearts in my body. I had love hearts in my eyes too.  The love hearts were my favourite.
By Maggie

Whizz!! Went a firework as it zoomed around the gravel. It sounded like a bee because it was buzzing like a bee. The colours were beautiful. They were all the rainbow.
By Finn

The fireworks made a bang! It was noisy so I covered my ears. I saw beautiful colours of the rainbow in the sky. I had a lovely time.
Cypris